TakeMySorrows

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For Jacob by TakeMySorrows, literature

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For Jacob

When I close my eyes everything is brighter The wood beneath my feet is gone and I am flying, nothing less than astral I see your face at every high, illuminated perfectly in my mind between these hanging lines And while I grasp tightly to this metal, there is something I know and do not fear If every time I sat here alone Made of what I do not understand I would not jump to God’s waiting hands For with them he could never push me– Here is paradise and here I will always return to lose myself in you on Heaven’s swing

For Sarah by TakeMySorrows, literature

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i'm not beautiful don't waste your breath save it for another time when it really counts like being underwater, drowning, buried 6 feet under that's what it's going to feel like being with me no one can hide who they really are believe me when i tell you to get out while you can love can overpower any obstacle only in our dreams and this dream isn't enough to save me from myself i'm not courageous talented, or bright not born to be anything special but another shadow dancing on the wall a puppet with no strings controlling but not in control broken in pieces that you can't put back together i don't know who i am and the

AIDS Story, Soon to be titled by TakeMySorrows, literature

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AIDS Story, Soon to be titled

I only thought that this was going to be a simple mission. Because in truth, this problem was indeed simple and I didn't see how it was so excruciatingly hard to solve. I didn't see how people could just continue to be so stupid. So clueless and careless. But it wasn't them, it was us, and he taught me. He was there to make me see. The school was small with a chalkboard and a few desks. The children crowded around in bunches, all silent, waiting to learn. To be taught skills that could lead them through their life without their mothers to be there to guide them. The only thing I never would have imagined is that they, in return,

With The Sun Pro. by TakeMySorrows, literature

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With The Sun Pro.

When Nallely told me that she wanted to be a part of the ocean, I didn't think she meant under the crashing waves. "It's only fitting," She explained as we sat among the white sand, watching the sunset slowly extinguish under the water. "I think it's where I belong." And there, I didn't exactly understand what she meant. In that moment I kept her close under the black sky, listening to her shallow breathing as she slept, never realizing that this may have been my last real night with her. To hold this beautiful girl in my arms and love her with every fiber of my being was the only purpose in my life, for now and forever. I couldn't b

because of me by TakeMySorrows, literature

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because of me

.this depressing poem is going to eat you alive at night as long as you know i wrote it and you will scream and writhe underneath the covers that seem like they're strangling you but you're really just losing it and everything you've ever known .you think that this is only a dream or maybe just more of a nightmare that you can't escape because i control where the unicorns go and if they get their wings when the clouds turn from white to grey and back, rain striking like needles and if you wake up with a smile on your face .sunrises are overrated or they might as well be now with those closed eyes of yours that were sowed with red th

you are beautiful by TakeMySorrows, literature

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you are beautiful

you're really not beautiful when you sleep no, they don't shine, your eyes, they won't glow it doesn't matter how many times i've tried because your smile isn't any better they don't fit together in fact they're prettier off alone as if any part of you is pretty i can't really be sure society keeps changing its mind on me and if i could tell society one small little thing it would be to shove it up their asses tell some one that cares because no one is perfect and i love you no matter what anyone says

Untitled Crystal Story by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Untitled Crystal Story

My worst fear had been brought upon me and no way was there to stop it. Obscurity was all around in only one shade of color that was visible to my straining eyes: black. My body was struck with shock and I was completely paralyzed, every inch of me. I couldn’t flail my arms as a natural reaction to plunging downward at unbelievable speeds. Time didn’t exist and I couldn’t exactly remember anything that came after the number one, the letter A, or anything in-between. My mind had gone blank as well. It could have been hours, days, months, I wouldn’t have known nor would I ever know anything more than I already did now. I

Rue part one: And again by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Rue part one: And again

Yesterday was probably the worst day for my soul. I don’t think it could take much more of this torture. All of us almost escaped. I was the only one left inside my room, and Shale was trying her hardest to open the door. Although, I don’t think my screaming was helping her in the slightest. When I heard it click open, I gasped and tried to push the door open, but it wouldn’t budge. And when I finally pried it open, it slammed back onto my right hand, breaking it with a deafening cracking noise. I couldn’t get it back open either to free my injured fingers. One of them was so close to ripping off. That

Luke part one: TV by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Luke part one: TV

Life is like a butterfly, it’s hard to catch but when you do it’s totally worthwhile. Wait no that was really cheesy. Okay, screw the metaphor. Or is it a simile? I can’t even remember anymore. I can’t remember anything since we got here! Were taken here, forced here, ‘tied up, had out heads banged a couple times and then locked up in this stupid little room with no TV’ here. I hate it here. There’s nothing to do. I’m not even classified as crazy! I don’t have a power, I’m normal, dammit, normal! I’m more normaler than any of these people! All I do is complain. And I’m

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For Jacob by TakeMySorrows, literature

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For Sarah by TakeMySorrows, literature

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AIDS Story, Soon to be titled by TakeMySorrows, literature

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AIDS Story, Soon to be titled

Don't Wait Up by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Don't Wait Up

Broken lives scattered across the plain of despair. Their screaming pleas can reach you even at the top of the world. Feeling twisted as you watch the people suffer below you. Their broken limbs and strangled thoughts only drive them farther down the hill. Even farther they go, even more unsafe with each step they take. Atop the moutain is the only safe area. A place of sanity. Cool breeze flows through your hair. Your hands feel the soft ground beneath you, and you wish you could be down there. To save the lives of crushed and withered. But to go down there, Would be sudden death. The plain would also suck you in, The tight gra

Reversed Reality by TakeMySorrows, literature

Without Resistance by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Without Resistance

The wiring snaps, Your body collapses, The muscles are tingling with excitement. Fists suddenly tighten, Teeth grit with a screech, And your eyes are searching for escape. "Let it go," You remind yourself, "You know that they're not worth it." But you can't find the righteousness inside you. Take a deep breath and another just in case, let the air flow right through you. Relax and close your eyes, Let the darkness surround you. "Can't do it," It chants. "Can't do it." Bursts of adrenaline run through your body, They stand right in front of you, Open and vulnerable like a child. It will take only two minutes to get what y

Save by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Save

When you will be created, God will breathe life into you. He'll form you with his fingers tips, Perfection will be within you. No line out of place, Every curve as it should be. Each hair gleaming and soft, Your velvet skin will be with no blemishes. No sin would come from within you, You would speak only words of truth. Steps of righteousness would be your only. Time after time you would do what was right, And never would you fault before your God. The Lord would make you perfect, You would be his everything. His child of greatness and purity. But when sin will come into your life, You will be his child no longer.

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Asher part one: Ass Probing by TakeMySorrows, literature

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Asher part one: Ass Probing

Obviously, we were in an alien testing facility. I was trying to tell everyone that, but they just wouldn’t listen to me. I also was constantly asking when they were going to probe something up my ass, but none of them answered my question. They kept tying me on a bed face down so I figured that’s what they were going to do eventually. Truthfully, though, besides the ass probing, I don’t have too much of a problem here. All the people seem nice enough, and I get three square meals a day. What’s the issue here, people? I’m only trying to escape because everyone else has a problem, and I want to help. And th

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Artist // Hobbyist // Literature

Jan 22
United States
Deviant for 15 years
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There is no way to describe how much I love words. I want to use words to change my world and make it amazing. I will live in a house of words, and make words my only tool, my most powerful and sacred weapon. The pen has always been mightier than the sword.

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Words. I believe I've effectively established that already.

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TakeMySorrows

Aug 6, 2012

New avatar, new me. Maybe?

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My new squid-y avatar rocks. I wish my deviantART name matched it. Something like SQUIDZILLA or LydzTheSquidz. I suppose TakeMySorrows works, cause I can just say, "Take my sorrows, so I can be happy and smile ridiculously, like the squid in my avatar" or something. I need to find inspiration. Hmm. Drugs, anyone? Anyone? No? Alright then. Perhaps something else, something easily attainable, not too pricy, and legal. But not TOO legal. Just legal enough. Reasonably legal. Yeeeah. I kind of miss deviantART. Just a wee little bit. But you can't exactly make money writing on this website. Especially not by putting up shitty poems. Ah, poetry